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  • McPhee on writing about science

    Thu, 2011-05-05 16:43 -- John Hawks

    The Paris Review has a long interview with writer John McPhee ("The Art of Nonfiction No. 3, John McPhee"). I like the writer interviews they have, and it is especially useful to see nonfiction writers in this forum. McPhee has been a staff writer at the New Yorker where he has written on many topics, he has additionally written more than 30 books.

    The interview goes into his work on environmental topics, including the book, Encounters with the Archdruid. He gives some very good advice about how to compose the structure of a nonfiction work. But I was most motivated to point to the interview because of this passage, where he discusses writing geology in the New Yorker:

    When I proposed writing about geology to [New Yorker editor William] Shawn, he was very sober about it. Well, he said, go ahead. Go ahead. Readers will rebel. But you go ahead; you’ll figure out a way—but readers will rebel.

    He was right. I’ve never had an experience like that. Readers strongly support it and strongly rebel, and seem to be split in camps.

    INTERVIEWER

    Why do you think that is?

    MCPHEE

    Two cultures. There are some people whose cast of mind admits that sort of stuff, and there are others who are just paralyzed by it at the outset, no matter how crafty the writing might be. A really nice thing that happens is when people say, I never thought I’d be interested in that subject until I read your piece. These letters come about geology too, but there are some people who just aren’t going to read it at all. Some lawyer in Boston sent me a letter—this man, this adult, had gone to the trouble to write in great big letters: stop writing about geology. And it’s on the letterhead of a law firm in Boston. I did not write back and say, One thing this country could very much use is one less lawyer. Why don’t you stop doing law?

    That is, of course, why writing for the internet is wonderful. People didn't pay to read it, they don't have to seek it out, so if they find it they're likely to want it. People who subscribe to the New Yorker are not the same as those who subscribe to Scientific American. Still, I have discussed the same problem with many editors of mainstream science magazines, who get similar responses from readers. There are a lot of cranks out there, who just don't want to engage with certain topics. It's not only the "two cultures" problem -- even within the "science" culture, people are epicures about what they want to know.

    McPhee's point struck me -- "no matter how crafty the writing might be." I think that's right. You can't trick people into science. No putting honey in the medicine. And if you give up the idea that you have to dumb it down, talk "friendly-like", well, then you can do some real writing.

  • Mailbag: Loren Eiseley

    Sun, 2011-01-23 00:04 -- John Hawks

    Re: The 'amazing' Boskops:

    Mr. Hawks:

    I don't know that Loren Eiseley was quite the amateur you've depicted in your blog.

    He was elected President of the American Institute of Human Paleontology by his peers - an uncommon distinction - and apparently without equal within the John Hawks biography.

    Reading over what I wrote, I don't think I've described Eiseley as a dilettante. He was an anthropologist and became provost of the University of Pennsylvania. He was also quite a wonderful writer, which became his enduring legacy. But he did no professional work on Boskop material and his essay brought attention to the question long after it had ceased to be of serious paleoanthropological interest.

    I don't tend to blame Eiseley, who should have known better but took some poetic license in what is quite evidently not a scientific paper. I think it remarkable that the idea would be brought back from oblivion despite the evidence!

  • Quote: Ellison on posthumous work

    Tue, 2010-09-28 13:10 -- John Hawks

    Writer Harlan Ellison has been saying goodbye to fans, according to the Madison independent paper, Isthmus. The interview is interesting, including this part about unfinished work and posthumous publication:

    "My wife has instructions that the instant I die, she has to burn all the unfinished stories. And there may be a hundred unfinished stories in this house, maybe more than that. There's three quarters of a novel. No, these things are not to be finished by other writers, no matter how good they are. It could be Paul Di Filippo, who is just about the best writer in America, as far as I'm concerned. Or God forbid, James Patterson or Judith Krantz should get a hold of The Man Who Looked for Sweetness, which is sitting up on my desk, and try to finish it, anticipating what Ellison was thinking -- no! Goddammit. If Fred Pohl wants to finish all of C.M. Kornbluth's stories, that's his business. If somebody wants to take the unfinished Edgar Allan Poe story, which has now gone into the public domain, and write an ending that is not as good as Poe would have written, let 'em do whatever they want! But not with my shit, Jack. When I'm gone, that's it. What's down on the paper, it says 'The End,' that's it. 'Cause right now I'm busy writing the end of the longest story I've ever written, which is me."

  • LeGuin interview

    Mon, 2010-03-01 12:17 -- John Hawks

    Claire Evans interviews author Ursula K. LeGuin. It's mostly about LeGuin's outspoken opposition to the Google copyright grab:

    Universe: What do you want to happen to your books after you die?

    UKL: I want them to be available, I want cheap paper editions of them, I want them to be continuously downloaded in forty different languages, I want them to be read, I want them to be argued about, I want people to cry over them, I want unreadable dissertations written about them, I want people to get angry with them, I want people to love them.

    I suppose I have a few readers who don't know that the "K" is for Kroeber, Ursula LeGuin being one of the most accomplished offspring of a famous anthropologist, whose books carry the imprint of that pedigree.

  • Write with a knife

    Sun, 2009-09-06 12:48 -- John Hawks

    It's that time of year again, when students all over the country are facing their first writing assignment. I always encourage a bloggy style -- concise, journalistic, and thesis-driven.

    Well, I don't even manage that ideal myself a lot of the time, but here's some useful writing advice from Copyblogger. First, "Do long blog posts scare away readers?". Well, they don't scare away mine, but I can always use suggestions for how to punch things up (or, like overleavened dough, down).

    So I highly recommend the follow-up, "How to write with a knife". One piece of advice I like:

    2. Cut the first paragraph

    ...Try cutting the first paragraph or two from your post and see what happens. You may find a much more powerful opening.

    That technique would work wonders for more than half the student papers I grade. I always underline the thesis statement (or at least the best facsimile of one I can find) and an awful lot of the time, it's there at the beginning or end of the second paragraph.

    There are six more recommendations at the link, and I can see my students in every one of them. (Not to mention myself).

  • Writing upward

    Fri, 2009-08-28 11:54 -- John Hawks

    Since I've already contributed to bellyaching about student writing assignments, it's only fair to point to a Wired article that says students are getting better:

    As the school year begins, be ready to hear pundits fretting once again about how kids today can't write—and technology is to blame....

    Andrea Lunsford isn't so sure. Lunsford is a professor of writing and rhetoric at Stanford University, where she has organized a mammoth project called the Stanford Study of Writing to scrutinize college students' prose. From 2001 to 2006, she collected 14,672 student writing samples—everything from in-class assignments, formal essays, and journal entries to emails, blog posts, and chat sessions. Her conclusions are stirring.

    "I think we're in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven't seen since Greek civilization," she says. For Lunsford, technology isn't killing our ability to write. It's reviving it—and pushing our literacy in bold new directions.

    Maybe Twitter will help with composing 140-character thesis statements?

  • Teaching writing

    Tue, 2009-08-25 12:44 -- John Hawks

    College classes are starting around the country, but writing assignments haven't been submitted yet. Time to brace yourself -- Stanley Fish blogs about what college writing courses are teaching:

    A few years ago, when I was grading papers for a graduate literature course, I became alarmed at the inability of my students to write a clean English sentence. They could manage for about six words and then, almost invariably, the syntax (and everything else) fell apart. I became even more alarmed when I remembered that these same students were instructors in the college’s composition program. What, I wondered, could possibly be going on in their courses?

    I teach several "writing across the curriculum" -type courses. The horror stories are a little overblown -- I'd say at least a fourth of my students start out able to write a thesis statement. Hey, that's something!

  • Does your Style have the right Elements?

    Tue, 2009-04-21 09:43 -- John Hawks

    I didn't notice myself, but a number of writers have been pointing out the fiftieth anniversary of a familiar classic, Strunk and White's The Elements of Style. I got the book halfway through its run. Somehow it seemed older to me then than it does now.

    Geoffrey Pullum would like to see the Elements forgotten, as he argues in a long essay for the Chronicle of Higher Education that Strunk and White were "idiosyncratic bumblers" when it comes to real English grammar. Pullum is famous in anthropology circles as the author of The Great Eskimo Vocabulary Hoax ; he frequently writes at Language Log, the famous linguistics blog.

    You'll find it an odd essay if you hate grammar Nazis -- Pullum makes Strunk and White look like Colonel Klink and Sergeant Schultz, but he has to go into full-on Brit-Lit Conan the Grammarian mode to do it.

    It's sad. Several generations of college students learned their grammar from the uninformed bossiness of Strunk and White, and the result is a nation of educated people who know they feel vaguely anxious and insecure whenever they write "however" or "than me" or "was" or "which," but can't tell you why. The land of the free in the grip of The Elements of Style.

    Those who have studied historical linguistics a bit, or the history of English in particular, will recognize many of his points. For example, the split infinitive is a natural construction, and nineteenth-century writers used "that" and "which" almost interchangeably.

    Still, students could use a good, short book to make them think about the words they write. That's certainly what Strunk and White did for me, and even if some of the examples make a linguist cringe, they did quite a job of anticipating the writing problems that students still produce, even fifty years after the fact. Besides that, it's a joy to read compared to the French style book I had to use in college. If you think English grammar Nazis are bad...

  • Graduate students and blogging

    Wed, 2008-07-23 13:46 -- John Hawks

    I've received a tremendous response to my essay earlier this week, the first part of my series on blogging and tenure. I wanted to thank everyone for their congratulations. More important, I got a lot of questions.

    Some of these questions will be answered during the series -- strategies for writing, ways to quantify your blog's impact, framing the right comparisons for your committee, and how to broaden the impact of your research.

    But I also got a few questions that I hadn't been intending to write about. Still, the topics are so interesting that I have to try!

    The first has to do with anonymity as a graduate student and blogging.

    One reader wrote:

    I was wondering if you could speak to graduate student blogging. I recently started a new blog under a pseudonym. I used to write a blog under my real name, but I'm in the process of scrapping it in favor of my new cryptically-authored blog. I did this for several reasons: (1) I was not pleased with the format of the old site/server, (2) I was embarrassed by my earlier posts, since the blog was largely an experiment in writing colloquially about science, and (3) I feared reprisals, especially with regard to funding/ the opinion of my work from faculty. I know you advocate using your real name when blogging for faculty, but what about graduate students? Do you know of dissertation committees viewing blog-writing as wasting valuable research time? Is there any data on the relationship between regular blogging, tenure, grant acquisition, etc.?

    When I started thinking about how to answer this question, I thought I should probably just beg off. I mean, I'm not a graduate student, and when I started keeping my blog I was in the third year of a tenure-track job.

    But after reflecting a bit, I realized that even though my blog is at the front of my mind, three previous failures lay behind it. Those failures began when I was a graduate student, young, ambitious, and full of misdirected energy.

    Let's start with the end of the question. As far as I know, there are no data concerning blogging and career success -- or, for that matter, between any kind of public outreach and success in research careers (as opposed to teaching or industry careers that directly involve outreach). Anecdotally, there are some people who spend a lot of effort on outreach who have very well-respected research careers, and others who don't. I'd say it's up to the individual to chart her own course.

    A waste of time?

    Will your committee think you are wasting your time? No matter what you are doing -- even if you are spending 18 hours a day doing benchwork -- your committee will think you're wasting your time, if you don't meet deadlines.

    In fact, there is nothing you could possibly do that is so noble that your committee won't think it's a waste of time. Heck, I was a postdoc when Gretchen and I had our first daughter, and I had colleagues (thank goodness, none that I worked with directly) who thought Sophie was a waste of time!

    Only you can decide the best use of your time. Certainly, you should seek the advice of your committee and other faculty members. But your job is not doing their bidding. Your job is educating yourself.

    You are not a passive consumer. You need to decide for yourself what kinds of activities will help you learn most effectively. Do you need practice writing about science for a non-technical audience? Do you need a mechanism for sharing drafts of your work? What about a collaborative writing environment? Or maybe just a way of sharing what's interesting about your work?

    Pseudonymous blogging has its own allure, but is actually a lot less different than it may seem. You can, after all, learn from an activity whether people know your identity or not.

    Or maybe it isn't about education, but instead enjoyment. Writing can be a great release. Participating in arguments or online communities can alleviate some of the alienation of graduate school -- where the independence and apprenticeship system may leave you feeling much more alone than as an undergraduate.

    In either case, you need to set realistic deadlines that work with your education. Your life may include teaching, second jobs, family, and everything else. You have to be realistic about whether you can take on another project. And you have to weigh how important those deadlines are -- do you want to finish your degree in five years? Or eight? Or twelve?

    Blog your dissertation

    I have known a number of people who blogged (or participated in message boards) as students under a pseudonym, but later stopped. What once was worthwhile ultimately changed to be less so. Why? First, because it worked. They became good at it. They learned the tricks of online argumentation. But also, with this achievement come diminishing returns. Eventually message board trolls all start to sound alike. It's like Tetris -- the blocks just keep on coming. You either bring something new to it, or you find something else to keep you interested. For a number of my correspondents, the "something else" has been their professional careers.

    I'd like to advocate for a model of blogging that many graduate students might find useful. If I were starting out today, I'd blog my dissertation. Why not? Is there really anything so secret in your history and literature review that it couldn't be read by the few hundred people who will find your blog?

    Now, you don't want to write things that would allow someone to scoop you. As a graduate student, you can't afford to lose your projects, because they create the publications that build your record. So don't write about research methods if they're new and don't blog results that you want to publish in a journal.

    It will make the writing a lot easier if you commit to a few pages a day, and plugging it into a content management system is a good idea whether it's public or not. The beauty of a blog is that it doesn't have to be finished to be good!

    There's no single answer to the question of reprisals or the relation of blogging to graduate funding. It may be that your committee is full of stodgy geezers who will never understand, and insist on things being done in exactly their way. Keep in mind: they might just know what they're talking about.

    But it seems to me that integrating your writing with your online presence can be a way to accelerate your work, meet deadlines, and network for your future professional career all at once. And if you've posted regular extracts from your work, you'll be ready to go into those meetings with committee members having already accomplished something.

    Final thoughts

    I once knew a graduate student who didn't want to be introduced to anyone at meetings. Why? Because he hoped to do something first, so that he could make an impression on people he met!

    It's not an irrational view, but it is counterproductive. Not irrational, because sometimes people do accomplish great things, and splash onto the scene, making great impressions on everyone. But counterproductive, because meeting people may help you accomplish those great things.

    Maybe you have something great to say to the world, and want to blog for everyone to read. But you can also blog in a small way, spending a little more effort making your notes legible, putting up first drafts of sections of your dissertation, or just writing a little about your field site. You might make contacts you would never have expected, or at least make your own corner of your field more aware of your work. And as you're doing it, you're helping your own research: developing a more polished and accessible writing style, or finding ways to tell stories that you will be retelling in job interviews and classes.

    Later: Some examples of how a blog might work for you.

  • Vonnegut on writing style

    Tue, 2008-07-15 10:10 -- John Hawks

    Ann Althouse links to Kurt Vonnegut's "How to write with style,", which deserves to be linked.

    I myself find that I trust my own writing most, and others seem to trust it most, too, when I sound most like a person from Indianapolis, which is what I am. What alternatives do I have? The one most vehemently recommended by teachers has no doubt been pressed on you, as well: to write like cultivated Englishmen of a century or more ago.

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