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  • Should science reporting have a standardized checklist?

    Wed, 2012-01-04 10:08 -- John Hawks

    An interesting read this morning from Fiona Fox, chief executive of Britain's Science Media Centre: "What If There Were Rules for Science Journalism?"

    She proposes a "checklist" for science reporting, which sounds to me a bit like the "Nutrition Facts" that the government puts on a box of cereal.

    A checklist would look something like the following. Every story on new research should include the sample size and highlight where it may be too small to draw general conclusions. Any increase in risk should be reported in absolute terms as well as percentages: For example, a "50 percent increase" in risk or a "doubling" of risk could merely mean an increase from 1 in 1,000 to 1.5 or 2 in 1,000. A story about medical research should provide a realistic time frame for the work's translation into a treatment or cure. It should emphasize what stage findings are at: If it is a small study in mice, it is just the beginning; if it's a huge clinical trial involving thousands of people, it is more significant. Stories about shocking findings should include the wider context: The first study to find something unusual is inevitably very preliminary; the 50th study to show the same thing may be justifiably alarming. Articles should mention where the story has come from: a conference lecture, an interview with a scientist, or a study in a peer-reviewed journal, for example.

    I think these are good recommendations for health reporting. An awful lot of people have adopted diet recommendations that at best can lower disease risk by a small fraction. Meanwhile, many continue smoking despite much larger and repeatedly demonstrated risks. Science and health reporting have not historically helped people to understand relative risks, and they do a poor job of informing people how scientific conclusions are produced. This lack of transparency has enabled a large niche for "health advisors" who are essentially quacks. People are poorly informed about how to distinguish quack advice from science.

    Nevertheless, I think some of Fox's recommendations verge on censorship -- their aim is to stop the public from being misdirected to unreliable findings, but the solutions are all oriented toward stopping the reporting of unreliable findings. I would prefer to see a change in emphasis away from reporting findings and toward reporting process. Scientists trust science without trusting every result, because they understand the process of science. The public will be better informed about scientific results when they see the process in action. A sharp reporter should not only attend to the immediate result of a study but the process underway to test and possibly reject today's findings.

  • Higgs hunting

    Thu, 2011-12-15 09:13 -- John Hawks

    I follow physics news but generally don't post about it. But after the recent Higgs boson press conference, I found this article by Lawrence Krauss to be a very useful explanation of the underlying physics (Why one Higgs boson will not be enough").

    Aside from Krauss' essay, I don't think most of the reporting actually explains anything about this. I tend to get my information from blogs instead.

    I've also watched several recent physics documentaries, presented by scientists, but these give pretty light coverage to current events in physics. They're all concerned with multiverses, wormholes, and other exotic sci-fi-sounding topics. I really don't think any of them explain the Standard Model well. Krauss puts the current Higgs focus in the context of the earlier discovery of the W and Z particles predicted by the Standard Model and confirmed in the 1980's. That's one of the earliest physics stories I remember, and it would be nice to see somebody do a documentary that included more of this historical context.

  • McPhee on writing about science

    Thu, 2011-05-05 16:43 -- John Hawks

    The Paris Review has a long interview with writer John McPhee ("The Art of Nonfiction No. 3, John McPhee"). I like the writer interviews they have, and it is especially useful to see nonfiction writers in this forum. McPhee has been a staff writer at the New Yorker where he has written on many topics, he has additionally written more than 30 books.

    The interview goes into his work on environmental topics, including the book, Encounters with the Archdruid. He gives some very good advice about how to compose the structure of a nonfiction work. But I was most motivated to point to the interview because of this passage, where he discusses writing geology in the New Yorker:

    When I proposed writing about geology to [New Yorker editor William] Shawn, he was very sober about it. Well, he said, go ahead. Go ahead. Readers will rebel. But you go ahead; you’ll figure out a way—but readers will rebel.

    He was right. I’ve never had an experience like that. Readers strongly support it and strongly rebel, and seem to be split in camps.

    INTERVIEWER

    Why do you think that is?

    MCPHEE

    Two cultures. There are some people whose cast of mind admits that sort of stuff, and there are others who are just paralyzed by it at the outset, no matter how crafty the writing might be. A really nice thing that happens is when people say, I never thought I’d be interested in that subject until I read your piece. These letters come about geology too, but there are some people who just aren’t going to read it at all. Some lawyer in Boston sent me a letter—this man, this adult, had gone to the trouble to write in great big letters: stop writing about geology. And it’s on the letterhead of a law firm in Boston. I did not write back and say, One thing this country could very much use is one less lawyer. Why don’t you stop doing law?

    That is, of course, why writing for the internet is wonderful. People didn't pay to read it, they don't have to seek it out, so if they find it they're likely to want it. People who subscribe to the New Yorker are not the same as those who subscribe to Scientific American. Still, I have discussed the same problem with many editors of mainstream science magazines, who get similar responses from readers. There are a lot of cranks out there, who just don't want to engage with certain topics. It's not only the "two cultures" problem -- even within the "science" culture, people are epicures about what they want to know.

    McPhee's point struck me -- "no matter how crafty the writing might be." I think that's right. You can't trick people into science. No putting honey in the medicine. And if you give up the idea that you have to dumb it down, talk "friendly-like", well, then you can do some real writing.

  • Blushing iron

    Thu, 2011-04-28 09:28 -- John Hawks

    Jo Marchant elegizes an 1858 lecture by John Ruskin, on the topic of iron ("Not just any old iron"). I had to relay this quote:

    "Is it not strange to find this stern and strong metal mingled so delicately in our human life that we cannot even blush without its help?"

  • "The monkeys shall do bugger all."

    Tue, 2011-04-19 21:32 -- John Hawks

    Martin Robbins goes ape:

    Other writers are preoccupied with trivia like the NHS reforms or education funding, but a great crime against pedantry is in progress and it's time for someone to draw a line. Like many of today's problems, this one is epitomized by a Daily Mail headline:

    "Fans go bananas for new Planet Of The Apes trailer which takes humanised monkey effects to a whole new level."

    Really? Really? Only actually, as 'humanised monkeys' go they look a bit rubbish to me, because they don't really look like monkeys at all, they look more like apes, what with the film being 'Planet of the Apes' and all.

    He's got a whole lot of similar examples. There are no end of British papers making stupid comments about monkeys.

    Still, if we're going to be pedantic, I've got to disagree with Robbins' placement of Brian Blessed in the apes:

    Humans are members of the ape family, distinguished by weediness, lack of hair, technological development and widespread ironic denial of their ape heritage.

    Humans are not apes.

    I'm not in denial about our ape heritage, and I know some people will argue with me. The most recent common ancestor of living apes is also a human ancestor. "Ape" as applied to chimpanzees, bonobos, gorillas, orangutans and siamangs, is not a monophyletic group. You have to include humans to make biological sense out of the apes.

    But by that argument, apes are monkeys. Because the living monkeys -- New World and Old -- do not have a common ancestor that living apes and humans do not also have.

    Ah. The perils of pedantry.

    I resolve this problem by recognizing that neither "ape" nor "monkey" is a taxonomic term. We have good terms for the monophyletic groups -- "hominoids" are apes + humans, "anthropoids" are apes + humans + monkeys. We can recognize that apes are not monkeys (because they aren't), and we can recognize in the same way that humans are not apes (because we aren't).

  • The "gay caveman"

    Thu, 2011-04-07 14:58 -- John Hawks

    I am just about to go crazy today. I just can't seem to escape the "gay caveman" story.

    No, I don't mean the Geico caveman who likes mango duck breast and who has Talia Shire as his therapist. His sexual orientation I don't know.

    I mean this story in the Telegraph (UK) ("First homosexual caveman found") which claims:

    The male body – said to date back to between 2900-2500BC – was discovered buried in a way normally reserved only for women of the Corded Ware culture in the Copper Age.

    The story is based on a press conference with archaeologists in Prague, who are involved in excavating and analyzing a series of burials found at a site in the city. PressTV has put a televised report online (HT Eric Michael Johnson). The work is newsworthy, but there is no publication immediately forthcoming. The burial in question, one of many, is interesting because the archaeologists have perceived a mismatch between the sex of the skeleton (they assess as male) and the grave goods and positioning of the skeleton (they assess as female).

    I have few comments, and really none at all about the archaeology in question. All they did was outreach for their ongoing work, talking about its possible scientific importance. Good for them!

    My criticism is limited to the Telegraph and the (at this count) hundreds of press outlets all over the world who have breathlessly repeated the "gay caveman" story. Heck, they've even raided Wikipedia.

    Dudes! I could be wrong, but I think that to have a "gay caveman", you need a skeleton that is both gay and a caveman. And this ain't either!

    Corded Ware burials are pre-Bronze Age farmers, not anywhere near cavemen. These are scientifically very informative, I should know as I've measured many European skulls of equal age. But the Telegraph may just as well have said that Stonehenge was built by cavemen.

    Er, well, given the quality of their science coverage, I shouldn't speak so soon -- maybe they actually do think that cavemen built Stonehenge...

    Kristina Killgrove is ahead of me on the story ("So, what we've learned is that this skeleton was neither a caveman nor necessarily gay."). She pointed me to Rosemary Joyce's post on the story ("'Gay Caveman': Wrecking a perfectly good story"). Joyce is an expert in sex and gender in archaeology and points to the problems that inevitably arise in sexing skeletal remains in these contexts:

    We need to know the age and possible lifeway of this individual to avoid what Lori Hager called “the sexism of sexing”. She used as her example a burial at Çatalhöyük of an older woman whose pelvic anatomy had been remodeled and diverged from the expectations for female skeletons.

    It would also help to know what criteria are being used to assess sex. In 2000, Chris Meiklejohn and colleagues published a discussion of Mesolithic Europe that noted the difficulty using robusticity, for example, to identify males, as some females were more robust than some males in the samples they examined.

    Then there is the question of intersexed individuals– those persons whose chromosomal sex may vary from the dichotomous grid of two sexes that is assumed by the reporters writing about this story, and apparently, by the archaeologists involved as well. Contrast this with the work of Rebecca Storey, who identified a royal burial at Copan as likely a genetically intersexed person.

    On the topic of transgender, third gender or homosexuality in skeletal remains -- I agree entirely with Joyce. My only further comment is that we don't have any scientific report about the skeleton. From a photograph it does not look like an obvious male to me. If there are DNA results or a more systematic survey of features, we'll just have to wait for them. Based only on skeletal features there is a substantial chance of sex misassignment (a female skeleton that looks more male than typical). From a Bayesian perspective, the chance of a misassignment is higher than the chance that the burial is truly unique among known Corded Ware burials.

    So, maybe gay but not clearly so, definitely not a caveman. Absolutely bad science reporting. Bad, bad, bad. Miserably awful. No links, no indication of affiliation of sources, no background information. No photo (the Daily Mail, of all places, came up with a photo of the burial, while the Telegraph illustrates their web story with generic stock photo of African rock art). No indication of whether the work is pre-publication or whether there's a forthcoming paper. Yuck.

    Synopsis: 
    A Czech team announces an ambiguous burial, and the press goes off the deep end.
  • Mailbag: Loren Eiseley

    Sun, 2011-01-23 00:04 -- John Hawks

    Re: The 'amazing' Boskops:

    Mr. Hawks:

    I don't know that Loren Eiseley was quite the amateur you've depicted in your blog.

    He was elected President of the American Institute of Human Paleontology by his peers - an uncommon distinction - and apparently without equal within the John Hawks biography.

    Reading over what I wrote, I don't think I've described Eiseley as a dilettante. He was an anthropologist and became provost of the University of Pennsylvania. He was also quite a wonderful writer, which became his enduring legacy. But he did no professional work on Boskop material and his essay brought attention to the question long after it had ceased to be of serious paleoanthropological interest.

    I don't tend to blame Eiseley, who should have known better but took some poetic license in what is quite evidently not a scientific paper. I think it remarkable that the idea would be brought back from oblivion despite the evidence!

  • Good science writing helps make good science

    Tue, 2011-01-18 18:22 -- John Hawks

    More than most will admit, scientists today depend on good science writing. What they read is coming from other scientists, from bloggers and students, and from traditional journalists embedded in a range of publication models.

    Most of us abandon our textbooks long before earning our Ph.D., digging deeper and deeper into the narrow research tracks that will support a career on the cutting edge. Merely reading research in that narrow field is not enough. We have to master it -- knowing the methods and results with such detail that we can take them up or find their flaws. It takes me days to really digest an important piece of science.

    Who loves science more than those who have devoted careers to it? We're far from the majority of consumers of mainstream science magazines (as pointed out by Ed Yong). But we consume them above our weight because good reporting fills an important need. Scientists are teachers, we interact with the public and many of us conduct research with importance to a broad audience. To do those things well, our knowledge must have equal breadth. Reading abstracts and conclusions is hardly enough, we need context. Some of that context comes from our training, but most of us rely on good science writing to bring us information outside our narrow specialties.

    Science writing emerges today from an ecosystem that includes traditional, "mainstream" publications, online news outlets and blogs. Many people have commented on the ways these information sources have converged as traditional science writers have come to depend on blogs, while bloggers link and comment on news and perspective pieces, and bring expert criticism to many scientific papers. Individually, these actors aren't doing anything very new, but collectively they have connected storytelling and critique in a way that can be instantly telegraphed to influential readers and a broader public.

    ScienceOnline2011 was a great meeting of many of the trailblazers in this new ecosystem. The halls were packed with people jazzed about science. A lot of the participants were working journalists, many aspiring science writers, and a good proportion of working scientists -- like the melba toasts in a bowl of Chex Mix.

    This melba is here to tell you how essential the ecosystem has become to working scientists. I read blogs, write a blog, read broadly across science. I want to know the story behind the research, and I want to know what critics think -- especially the ones who have done other work I like. I can't read every new paper outside my area, but if I'm interested enough to follow up, I want immediate links to the originals.

    I need the ecosystem. It enables me to be a publicly engaged scientist and an effective teacher. Besides that, this community helps with my research. Working at the borderline between genetics and paleontology isn't easy, and I find that many important insights come from even farther afield. The ecosystem lets me stretch my antennae across a much bigger cross-section of today's science.

    I may be an outlier in my engagement with blogs and social media, but I know my colleagues. Many in human genetics have learned essentially everything they know about modern human origins from reading the press. Especially the postdocs and grad students coming in from other fields, who may never have taken an anthropology course. Likewise, many paleoanthropologists only know the genetics that they've heard at conferences or read in the news. That's why it has been so essential for us engaged in the field to educate and engage with science journalists. Without accurate coverage of human evolution, we can hardly keep interdisciplinary research going. Like biological ecosystems, the science writing ecosystem provides us services that are often unpaid and unrecognized.

    Some readers may think I'm exaggerating the value of science writing. Surely I'm glossing over its many problems. Surely scientists should be getting their information from peer-reviewed research, not second-hand accounts.

    I'm no Pollyanna about these problems, but they're hardly new. Universities have always overinflated their press releases, and know-nothing writers have always embellished them. Sensationalism, even outright misleading headlines or stories, are still out there attracting eyes, but then they always were. There have always been scientists who failed even to read abstracts of papers, much less working to understand their methods.

    What's new is the diversity of reporting, along with a growing number of people in a position to -- as David Dobbs says -- "call bullshit" on bad writing. Blogs, mainstream science reporting, emerging writers, podcasts -- all provide overlapping channels of information at multiple levels to overlapping audiences. The resulting community is much smaller than the pooled readership of its printed or online output, but vastly larger than the combined Rolodexes of top science journalists 10 years ago.

    I don't need to recount the way blogs have changed reporting, but I hope to highlight how they make science better. Reporting and commentary are not pre-publication peer review, but no firewall separates these functions. Both require honesty and candor about science's methods and limits. Our ecosystem today accords less privilege to "top" journals, and more to the scientists and writers who take initiative.

    Synopsis: 
    A classic post after ScienceOnline 2011 discusses the role of the science press in enabling scientists to do interdisciplinary work.
  • Backdrop to scientist quotes

    Sun, 2010-10-17 02:28 -- John Hawks

    JR Minkel did a story on evolved sex differences for Scientific American ("Student Surveys Contradict Claims of Evolved Sex Differences"). Personally, I never take the results of student surveys to be good evidence about psychology. But the reason I'm pointing to the article is that Minkel posted on his blog the critical commentary he received from David Buss ("David Buss defends evolved sex differences (exclusive!)").

    In this case Buss wrote in response to an invitation. I wonder what would happen if this approach was more widespread -- articles about science accompanied by e-mail commentary from the scientists. Maybe the journals ought to pay them in that event. But there are a lot of crummy stories (not necessarily this one) where I, as a reader, wish I could read more of the scientist's opinion than the short quote that the journalist may have used.

    I suppose if I got called upon to do this, I'd get tired of it pretty quickly. Or be like, "Dude, read my blog."

  • Neandertal headlines

    Wed, 2010-10-06 17:29 -- John Hawks

    For two weeks I've been reading news feeds about how volcanoes killed the Neandertals. I mean, seriously:

    USA Today: "Volcanoes wiped out the Neanderthals?"

    National Geographic: "Volcanoes Killed Off Neanderthals, Study Suggests"

    NY Times: "Neanderthals’ Big Loss in Battle of the Elements"

    UPI: "Volcanic Winter Blamed for Neanderthal Extinction"

    The other stories of the last couple of weeks are some variant of "Neanderthals Were Not So Stupid After All". They make quite a juxtaposition.

    I think they could save some print by combining the stories: "No Longer Rock-Brained, Neandertals Kiss Ash Goodbye". Or "Neandertals Outwit Ice, Die By Fire."

    Oooh, oooh! "Misunderstood Neandertals Pursue Morose Creator To North Pole".

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From a finger bone of an ancient human came the record of a completely unexpected population. My lab is working on the science of the Denisova genome.

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